Editorial Report B.2

The following is a report on the conclusion of my video.

Audience Questions

How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

I added narration to the conclusion so that the audience could connect with the author's point.

How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

I added a faster editing which would help the audience feel more engaged into the matter.

“Selection from ‘Rough Cut’” can be found here.

“Re-edited Selection” can be found here.