Editorial Report A.2

The following is an edited out cut of my introduction.


Post Title: Editorial Report

Audience Questions

1. How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

   
   

   I included some more information on the subject matter at hand.
   
   
   
2. How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

I included more music to the introduction than before.

“Selection from ‘Rough Cut’” 

here.


“Re-edited Selection”

here.