Editorial Report a

The following is a "Selection from ‘Rough Cut" of my project. I selected the section which discusses chemists and what they convey. Here is the Re-edited Selection of this cut.



Audience Questions

1)How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

In the revised section I added more explanation on not only in what format the content of chemists in presented in but how. In other words, what wording do they use, how precise and detailed it has to be, etc. 

2)How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

I changed the color of the heading to make the section easier to identify when reading the project and also highlighted certain key words in red to emphasize to the audience their significance.