Editorial Report 15b

The following is a section of my brief introduction.


Audience Questions

1)How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

I think the introduction includes an better introduction because of the music. This addition of musical content helps the audience feel more like they are truly listening to a podcast.

2)How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

The form changed a bit drastically where I included an intro song to give the podcast more flavor.


“Selection from ‘Rough Cut’” '

here.

“Re-edited Selection”

here.