Editorial Report 15a

The following is a section of my brief conclusion.


Audience Questions

1)How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?

I think the outro-duction includes an better outroduction because of the music. This addition of musical content helps the audience feel more like they are truly listening to a podcast.

2)How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?

The form changed a bit drastically where I included the same intro song into my outro so that the audience can recognize unconsciously that things are being wrapped up.

“Selection from ‘Rough Cut’” '

here.

“Re-edited Selection”

here.