Local Revision: Pronoun Usage.

The following is an analysis of my pronoun usage for project 1

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1. Based on your analysis, how effective is your pronoun usage in Project 1? What does actively examining your pronoun usage tell you about your writing syle?
My pronoun usage is pretty effective. I noticed I did not have that many pronouns in my work which was quite alarming.

2. Are there any instances in your project where you speak to or refer directly to the audience? If so, how effective are these moments at creating a bond or connection between audience and author? If not, why not? Explain why you're choosing to leave your audience out of your writing. There's nothing wrong with that, per se, but you should be able to give a sophisticated explanation of your choices.

There are a handful of moments where I speak directly to the audience and I think it gives them comedic relief and a bondage that gets them the information across in a manner that they will remember in their minds for a long time.