I did my peer review for the wonderful Sofia Haserot. Here is sweet and simple peer review of her rough draft and what I told her she could maybe improve on.
Perform the activity and then write a concise but detailed blog post that includes:
- Sofia Haserot, "Open Post to Peer Reviewers."
- I made a copy-editing suggestion.
- I think I barely helped dear Sofia simply for the fact that I thought her podcast was near damn perfect so I did not really give her much advice.
- I incorporated some genre convention ideas from the Student's Reading book.
- I just straight up loved how Sofia managed to make the "scripted" version of a podcast actually work and sound relate-able. Sofia, kudos to you!
my comment (roughly): "Hi Sofia, Marvin here. I truly enjoyed your podcast. It was relatively small compared to the usual student podcast....but that's incredible!You said practically everything you needed to and I freaking enjoyed that!Um, let's see I would just suggest maybe at your conclusion adding a crazy story of you staying up late or something like that (which honestly is not necessary but just a thought).
Fantastic work Sofia!"
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